Lazy Poet’s Thursday Haiku

berries

Blood red and fulsome

bursting with passion that tempts

but beware naïve lips

 

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15 thoughts on “Lazy Poet’s Thursday Haiku

  1. Yes, I notice the alliteration as well. By the time I got to the last line my lips felt bruised and swollen. ❤ An invitation to a warning. 🙂
    What kind of berries are those. I wonder if they are similar to what we call choke cherries. 💡

  2. Clever! 🙂
    I’ve been meaning to comment on the header for a while, Gilly. They look like crazy fireworks but less harmful than the real thing. Craftwork, I presume? I really like them.

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