Julia gave us this image of the Grand Canyon for the prompt this week and I’m very late! But anyway this is my 103 words.
On Time
So this is it. February 4th 2013 and I’m early, ever cautious. I was worried that you’d wait just a few minutes and then give up.
I have to get off this platform, it’s making me feel sick, or perhaps it’s just butterflies. Yes that’s it. Why did I come? Maybe you won’t. Crazy idea, you probably forgot straight away. Ten years ago, my birthday.
I should have told you.
About Macey.
I see you, now’s your chance to turn right around.
Bella you look wonderful. And this pretty lady?
You look about nine years old.
You smile at yourself in Macey’s eyes.
http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2013/01/28/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week75/
Oops I see that the new prompt has arrived!
I love this, Gilly. Very good. I just couldn’t seem to get the time to THINK enough about this one to do one on it. I’m glad you did.
This is very good… enjoyed it…
Nice job, Gilly – I like the way you introduce the situation a little at a time, just at the right speed for us to understand when we get to the end!
Such a great setting, and a circular kind of story on a limb. k.
De-light-FUL! The picture made me dizzy though but the story is absolutely scumptious. Love it, Gilly. Wonderful.
marvellous! suspenseful and thrilling 🙂
Love it! Words that make you feel that you were there.
Aah, great location to find out 🙂
You done it well Gilly , Beautiful post my friend 🙂
intriguing.
Intriguing, I would say
I am working backwards but still loving it
That photo made me dizzy too but it is a stunning setting and view… Vertigo or not. 😆