100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups Week# 76

Julia says the prompt wrote itself after last weeks. As I only just wrote week 75 I decided to continue where I left off.

On Time part 2

She was entranced by you from the start; my daughter, usually so reticent, actually allowed you to take her hand. In the café Macey giggled with a child on the next table, and you, well you didn’t seem to know who to look at first.

            She is mine isn’t she? You asked, squeezing my hand. If I’d wanted to keep it secret I would have. I caught Macey looking from you to me, and back again, wondering.

You gradually moved into our lives from that day, but I can’t help asking myself what’s beneath the surface? Did you choose both of us or Macey?



14 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups Week# 76

  1. Oh, this is perfect, Gilly! Great second chapter. And I’m glad you did this, because when I read the first one, I felt so disappointed that it couldn’t continue.

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